高考英语读后续写技巧与训练(18专题,Word版,405页)
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读后续写,大部分都是围绕conflict,solution来运转的,首先你能看懂材料,如果这一步无法完成,那这篇文章并不适合你。然后,你要找到文章到底提出什么冲突或问题。大部分文章都是这个模式:
(1)情绪:消极情绪
(2)细节:进一步解释描写
(3)转折:个人的努力或借助外界
(4)转机:事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
(5)失望:但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
(6)新法:突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
(7)结局:过了一段时间;事情有了最后的转折
(8)总结:点题,呼应前文
第1步 情绪:情绪描写
第2步 细节:进一步解释描写
【例1】
情绪描写∶ 笑 |
smile brightly;laugh; beam; light(sth)up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing; wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile |
细节描写∶笑 |
看到直升飞机,Jane高兴地笑了起来。 (1)At the sight of the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy. (2)Seeing the helicopter,Jane beamed with wild joy. (3)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,Jane's eays/face lit up with delight. (4)The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,a bright smile lit up Jane's faceleyes. |
【例2】
情绪描写∶哭 |
cry; sob; weep; burst into tears; burst out crying;(one's eyes)brim with/befull of/be filled with tears |
细节描写∶哭 |
(1)A lump came to his throat.他哽咽欲哭。 (2)Her eyes were red from crying.她的双眼哭得通红。 (3)Her eyes brimmed with tears.她的眼里满含泪水。 (4) Tears coursed/trickled/streamed/ran down her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。 |
【例3】
情绪描写∶ 害怕 |
frightened; panicked; scared; speechless;in(a)panic; in a cold sweat;be full of fear; be filled with terror;be rooted to the spot; freeze;run away; flee; one'sknees feel weak; (hands) sweat |
细节描写∶ 害怕 |
我感到很害怕。 (1) I felt very frightened/scared/panicked. (2) I was in (a) panic/was full of fear. (3)I stood rooted to the spot,brimming with fear/filled with fear. (4)I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. (5)I froze with terror, too scared to move. (6)I was seized by a strong sense of horror; my palms sweating. |
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